Rainforests
3.5 to 7 billion rainforest trees get cut down every year and over 4,000 species have gone extinct just in the rainforests. And every year the rainforests decay little by little, and over 20% of the air we breathe comes from the rainforests. The Rainforest is one of the most important things on this world because if it disappeared then the rain would decrease in big numbers witch would cause droughts and severe climate change. If we would make the rainforest a national park the world would be way cleaner and it would be a start to saving nature. My prediction is that if we make the rainforest a national park for 100 years, the rainforest will be ten times bigger than what it is and we could maybe stop climate change. That is why we should help the rainforest.
Some cool things about the rainforest is that you can find many beautiful species there, its very colorful and enormous. There are so many different plants birds monkeys you name it! There is also a ton of sea creatures as well as piranhas. I wanted to talk about piranhas because most people get the wrong idea about them, people think theyll just chomp you right up but that is a myth. Scientists proved that piranhas wouldnt eat you always and its a stated fact that piranhas get eaten more than they eat.
You have many typos and run on sentences, you also need at least 3 paragraphs (topic, body and closing). You have no closing to this blog, it just ends abruptly.
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